tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post1611976568038887941..comments2023-09-23T21:55:25.327+07:00Comments on fictional mixtape: PSYCHOPOMP - CHAPTER TWELVE (Twitter Novel / Keitai Shousetsu)Jason Gusmannhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12797943123500708850noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post-760770994185015802010-05-25T19:06:43.047+07:002010-05-25T19:06:43.047+07:00Jason, I have been away waaaay to long. Going back...Jason, I have been away waaaay to long. Going back through the archives now to catch up. Just let me get myself a cuppa first :)Maxinehttp://slamup.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post-48663532410241896382010-05-15T21:15:17.674+07:002010-05-15T21:15:17.674+07:00the idea about pace grew out of the work itself an...the idea about pace grew out of the work itself and presented that way of seeing. its what happens when you read it. the ideas have time to germinate and connect from hinted evocation to brilliantly deliberate. in seeing a train passing the cars are linked and each one has a function. one is full of hay livestock and a hobo, a caboose full of passengers, another car carrying steel and wood - anyway it's easy to react to such great material!tipotahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11852418271537614823noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post-77138396526532608822010-05-15T07:31:53.608+07:002010-05-15T07:31:53.608+07:00tipota, you never fail to make my day/evening by i...tipota, you never fail to make my day/evening by isolating the elements that make a piece actually work. there is a real gift in not only being able to write with the power you do but also to analyze with the ear you have.Jason Gusmannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12797943123500708850noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post-38821138941846796182010-05-14T20:44:42.149+07:002010-05-14T20:44:42.149+07:00'he runs full bore away' love that line. t...'he runs full bore away' love that line. this is just getting greater and greater. the pace is amazing within each chapter and between the chapters emerging. really wonderful writing jason!tipotahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11852418271537614823noreply@blogger.com