tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post6484785125877329134..comments2023-09-23T21:55:25.327+07:00Comments on fictional mixtape: PSYCHOPOMP - CHAPTER ONE (Twitter Novel / Keitai Shoustesu)Jason Gusmannhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12797943123500708850noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post-48427915613874496842010-02-27T17:58:39.689+07:002010-02-27T17:58:39.689+07:00yuck. but i am hooked. do i have time to run up ...yuck. but i am hooked. do i have time to run up and get another large diet pepsi?rhodahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10694315635082071848noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post-37256761101721908782010-02-27T09:43:11.275+07:002010-02-27T09:43:11.275+07:00i could picture that house jason, the strange comp...i could picture that house jason, the strange compelling draw of it. the details and repeated 'bad house' have a real tempo. seems a lot of sound around this piece of writing too. the sense of sound, really strong. the spotlight crackles the dark. i reach out for the plump oily greenish doorknob or something and it turns, gasp. love it.tipotahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11852418271537614823noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post-90209603192562082142010-02-27T08:08:19.269+07:002010-02-27T08:08:19.269+07:00I was waiting for you to tell the reader that the ...I was waiting for you to tell the reader that the house was in Elizabeth NJ. Just kidding. Seriously I like the dark tones to your work lately. You do it well.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com