tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post7021695818468467245..comments2023-09-23T21:55:25.327+07:00Comments on fictional mixtape: RICHIE (Chapter One - Twitter Novel / Keitai Shosetsu Version)Jason Gusmannhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12797943123500708850noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post-26742138373807023922009-03-14T10:15:00.000+07:002009-03-14T10:15:00.000+07:00I like Richie more than Desmond so far. Mind you ...I like Richie more than Desmond so far. Mind you I am reading these in reverse order. <BR/><BR/>Your characters are absolutely real.<BR/><BR/>xoxo<BR/><BR/>ReneeReneehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11785932958464359112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post-2069104371814576332009-03-05T21:30:00.000+07:002009-03-05T21:30:00.000+07:00um, "not sure if this is helpful"? only in comple...um, "not sure if this is helpful"? only in completely making my day worth living. i couldn't be happier that you feel it works spoken - i was hoping that the "enforced stanzas" would work out rhythmically. thank you so much.Jason Gusmannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12797943123500708850noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post-76849964073658598762009-03-04T05:34:00.000+07:002009-03-04T05:34:00.000+07:00I'm not sure if this is helpful, but the cell phon...I'm not sure if this is helpful, but the cell phone style prompted me to read the piece out loud. It works.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post-31835451236526922892009-03-02T11:54:00.000+07:002009-03-02T11:54:00.000+07:00That was wonderful, Jason. Not to disagree with o...That was wonderful, Jason. Not to disagree with others but I kinda liked the cell phone version more than the first- something about the formatting I really dug. I think you're a talented writer.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post-42543684291015852062009-03-02T09:45:00.000+07:002009-03-02T09:45:00.000+07:00actually...if you go to http://twitter.com/fiction...actually...if you go to http://twitter.com/fictionlmixtape i'm kind of doing that now. thanks all of you folks for yr kind words, and i especially appreciate your gentle criticism, LR. the mood issue bugs me too, but i've got to see if that balances out with the immediacy, etc. either way, thanks again.Jason Gusmannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12797943123500708850noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post-34311555363881149592009-03-02T05:36:00.000+07:002009-03-02T05:36:00.000+07:00You should do a Twitter remix lol.You should do a Twitter remix lol.I am not Kek-whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06616348388558622213noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post-45197961905259341212009-03-02T05:35:00.000+07:002009-03-02T05:35:00.000+07:00This comment has been removed by the author.I am not Kek-whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06616348388558622213noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post-59382888423006102632009-03-02T02:53:00.000+07:002009-03-02T02:53:00.000+07:00i would definitely go for the regular version. thi...i would definitely go for the regular version. this cell phone version is a bit too lengthy and lacks the mood of the regular one...L.R.643https://www.blogger.com/profile/03330242380545045441noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post-63703146763144048052009-03-01T10:25:00.000+07:002009-03-01T10:25:00.000+07:00You are someone to watch, I think. Your blog is re...You are someone to watch, I think. Your blog is really impressive - I like the name, your observations, your writing style - everything. I'll be back!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post-38585634375646932832009-03-01T10:13:00.000+07:002009-03-01T10:13:00.000+07:00Fantastic! Please let Richie know that I looked up...Fantastic! Please let Richie know that I looked up Robert Williams and his work is pretty damn cool you betchya.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post-11973598281876336732009-03-01T06:28:00.000+07:002009-03-01T06:28:00.000+07:00That is brilliant, Jason. The kids voice is perfec...That is brilliant, Jason. The kids voice is perfect, the depth of the idea hidden in the mumbling and stumbling and he displays the idea he discusses in his attitude. Brought him to life in 3D. And would definitely work, cell phone style in the market. Informed with referencing to pop culture and literary and social history that adds real value. Perfect.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post-34713786023815936492009-02-27T07:32:00.000+07:002009-02-27T07:32:00.000+07:00this is the cell phone version of the "richie" cha...this is the cell phone version of the "richie" chapter. see watcha think.Jason Gusmannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12797943123500708850noreply@blogger.com