tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post8064223399479640721..comments2023-09-23T21:55:25.327+07:00Comments on fictional mixtape: RICHIE - CHAPTER SEVEN (Twitter Novel / Keitai Shosetsu)Jason Gusmannhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12797943123500708850noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post-11654878144344399982009-06-05T12:17:57.497+07:002009-06-05T12:17:57.497+07:00Pretty good, I thought your poem was trying to say...Pretty good, I thought your poem was trying to say something like the one I am witting next (One of my favorite songs from my teens, composed by roger waters), specially the first part of yours.<br /><br />[Jim:] "This is K.A.O.S.<br />You and I are listening to KAOS in Los Angeles.<br />Let's go to the telephones now and take a request."<br />[Billy:] "Hello, I'm Billy."<br />[Jim:] "Yes?"<br />[Billy:] "I hear radio waves in my head."<br />[Jim:] "You hear radio waves in your head?<br />Ah! Is there a request that<br />you have tonight for KAOS?"<br />Radio waves<br />Radio waves<br />Radio waves<br />He hears radio waves<br />Radio waves<br />The atmosphere is thin and cold<br />The yellow sun is getting old<br />The ozone overflows with radio waves<br />AM, FM, weather and news<br />Our leaders had a frank exchange of views<br />Are you confused, radio waves<br />Radio waves<br />Radio waves<br />AM radio waves<br />FM radio waves<br />Radio waves<br />Mind-numbing radio waves<br />Fish-stunning radio waves<br />Radio waves<br />Magic Billy in his wheel chair<br />Is picking up all this stuff in the air<br />Billy is face to face with outer space<br />Messages from distant stars<br />The local police calling all cars<br />Radio waves<br />Hear them radio waves<br />Radio waves<br />Jesus saves radio<br />Radio waves<br />Radio waves<br />AM radio waves<br />FM radio waves<br />All them radio waves<br />Radio waves<br />Radio waves<br />He hears radio waves<br />Radio waves<br />Radio waves<br />Hopeful radio waves<br />Dopeful radio waves<br />Radio waves<br />Russian radio waves<br />Prussian radio waves<br />Eastern radio waves<br />Western radio waves<br />Testing radio waves<br />One two<br />One two<br />Radio waves<br />Getting through to you<br />More code radio waves<br />Tobacco road radio waves<br />South to Paloma radio waves<br />Oklahoma City radio waves<br />Sitting pretty radio waves<br />Nitty-gritty radio waves<br />Radio waves<br />[Jim:] "Alright, that's a song called Radio Waves.<br />You are listening to KAOS<br />In Los Angeles and we've got Billy on the line."<br />[Billy:] "I'm from the valleys."Mariana Sofferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13351209522681966230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post-63726714478996019002009-06-04T21:16:23.455+07:002009-06-04T21:16:23.455+07:00riveting! loved most parts of it, wont forget some...riveting! loved most parts of it, wont forget some, wow. dont forget to show and tell when the novel is over :)!!Mental Misthttp://mentalmist.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post-70188914199058200712009-06-04T17:52:58.162+07:002009-06-04T17:52:58.162+07:00Your words are captivating indeed, drawing the eye...Your words are captivating indeed, drawing the eyes forever onwards. <br /><br />There is a really nice symmetry to this piece as well.Traceyhttp://quietpaws.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post-40380289759846498852009-06-04T07:07:43.053+07:002009-06-04T07:07:43.053+07:00again, thank you all so much. i'm going throu...again, thank you all so much. i'm going through a really difficult time right now (work mostly) and yr encouragement means the world to me. thanks again.Jason Gusmannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12797943123500708850noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post-88817081742171593172009-06-03T06:15:06.736+07:002009-06-03T06:15:06.736+07:00Wonderful writing here. Again, I was fully engulf...Wonderful writing here. Again, I was fully engulfed in the story. Looking forward to the next installment.Cocoyeahttp://www.coceyea.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post-2692753683889295092009-06-01T23:50:06.196+07:002009-06-01T23:50:06.196+07:00wicked cool jason, dark and funny and tactile, lik...wicked cool jason, dark and funny and tactile, like being thereAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post-21715751736289150182009-06-01T06:00:36.023+07:002009-06-01T06:00:36.023+07:00Nice one. I like Richie, even though he may be a ...Nice one. I like Richie, even though he may be a closet psychopath or whatever, he's a great character.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post-30551531910954169242009-05-31T14:47:58.814+07:002009-05-31T14:47:58.814+07:00I couldn't stop reading...
Captivating.I couldn't stop reading...<br />Captivating.Disturbed Strangerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18310910591108392774noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post-31327195267915857112009-05-29T19:05:56.217+07:002009-05-29T19:05:56.217+07:00Did you have a bionic man radio too? Oh yeah! The ...Did you have a bionic man radio too? Oh yeah! The magic of stealing music off a barbed wire fence with a retractable bionic alligator clipped wire would no doubt make my son go all googly eyed and 'what the?!' p2p my arse!!! Give me a shortwave radio and a dial; USB enhanced.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post-23048107927170430082009-05-29T11:10:27.748+07:002009-05-29T11:10:27.748+07:00That is cool. The voices and characterisations are...That is cool. The voices and characterisations are perfect and the way you capture their age, they feel perfectly that age, brilliant. And then weaving the blog at the end is very clever. If you had time, you could make that blog, my mad mind weaves a plan, haha, blurring the boundaries between reality and fiction as your brilliant writing does.Paulhttp://gingatao.com/noreply@blogger.com