tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post5092646722438730284..comments2023-09-23T21:55:25.327+07:00Comments on fictional mixtape: RICHIE - CHAPTER TWENTY-ONE (Twitter Novel / Keitai Shousetsu)Jason Gusmannhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12797943123500708850noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post-41202742063270584522009-09-30T10:20:37.804+07:002009-09-30T10:20:37.804+07:00your Ketai S. form is wonderful, just thought I...your Ketai S. form is wonderful, just thought I'd tell you, in some chapters it is more apparent than others, how the form is working for the story, if you know what i mean...Emanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11308204574517001952noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post-44175817726147595632009-09-18T18:04:47.630+07:002009-09-18T18:04:47.630+07:00miss demure restraint - thanks for reading - so ha...miss demure restraint - thanks for reading - so happy to see you!<br /><br />mariana - yeah, that relationship kind of changes how we see richie. its interesting to develop his past, especially because it is mysterious.<br /><br />sp - i'm so glad it refers back to the comics for you! comics were a real influence for me growing up, and i definitely used to wait for further installments -<br /><br />maxine - rum and chocolate...mmmm. you deserve to relax after all that work! great job!<br /><br />paul - dead on, as usual. it is just a matter of time before their sense of control is challenged, and goes right out the window.<br /><br />tipota - the weaving is still something i'm working on in a bigger context. yr weaving skills are unquestioned, tho.Jason Gusmannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12797943123500708850noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post-30081460791989316612009-09-17T01:34:40.266+07:002009-09-17T01:34:40.266+07:00wow jason, the way it weaves in and out of their h...wow jason, the way it weaves in and out of their heads and mine and i guess yours and evrybody elses, this saga is amazing and so unique, will be back for more!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post-46667409604504242022009-09-15T10:00:32.482+07:002009-09-15T10:00:32.482+07:00The plot thickens. I agree there is this momentum,...The plot thickens. I agree there is this momentum, a kind of feeling of inevitability in it like they have been sucked into a story they won't be able to control. It is simply a fantastic peice of writing, Jason, in everyway, poetical and story-telling.Paulhttp://gingatao.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post-50704440584330193732009-09-13T04:04:02.628+07:002009-09-13T04:04:02.628+07:00Finally having time to come and catch up on Richie...Finally having time to come and catch up on Richie! Going to sit down with a big mug of hot chocolate (maybe even with some rum in it)and get reading!Maxinehttp://slamup.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post-40827465903896286302009-09-12T22:49:33.720+07:002009-09-12T22:49:33.720+07:00This just gets better and better. The rhythm of i...This just gets better and better. The rhythm of it generates this almost frightening sense of inexorability, of being pulled towards the conclusion, of falling head first into the unstoppable story with its tension and tenderness so palpable. <br /><br />I also like the serial format. It's like the comics I read when I was younger - I used to lie in wait for the paper boy for hours, waiting for the next instalment.Sack Possethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12149646494377478785noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post-12950836963697673172009-09-12T13:39:59.127+07:002009-09-12T13:39:59.127+07:00Excelent text, thank Jason for it. I can see you c...Excelent text, thank Jason for it. I can see you change here the person who tells the story is not the same any more, that makes it more interesting to me, it is like you provided another eyes to see it, So we can have a more complete view. I also like when you say "i was way too hard on everybody<br />except her", I like that description of the character, cause that is how I think he was, and probably he was in love with her, that is why she was treated better by him. It makes sense.<br />Great text, take care JasonMariana Sofferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13351209522681966230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8604901675839835449.post-69597627924349271522009-09-12T00:07:27.461+07:002009-09-12T00:07:27.461+07:00Fascinating … just spent the last hour reading her...Fascinating … just spent the last hour reading here. It’s a bit strange reading it backwards, but now I can follow along. I just love this, so unique.<br /><br />Consider me a fan.<br /><br />Miss DMiss Demure Restrainthttp://missdemurerestraint.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.com