Saturday, May 16, 2009

GUN CRAZY (Part Twenty-Seven)



- blank -
jammed between channels
white static noise


NO MORE: words, war, bullets, blood, sister, captor, codes, codices, enemies, lines, fortress, radio, Rimbaud, angels, heroes, agents, decoders, demands, translators, transmitters, nations, generations, translations, transcending, transmission, mission


NO MORE: win
NO MORE: lose
NO MORE: gun
NO MORE: crazy


11 comments:

Jason Gusmann said...

And that's it. Hope the ending feels like one. Thanks for reading!

Maxine said...

Love this. Now where is the audio?

Cocoyea said...

It does feel like an ending to a very powerful piece. I enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing.

Paul said...

Style.

maekitso said...

Congratulations. Not the end but 'an end'. I need to learn some new accolades befitting of your originality and passion. Standing ovation.

Mariana Soffer said...

Great poem.
It shows you are jammed between channels.(By the way great phrases)
What is the reason for all that banning? just because? do you plan to acomplish something?
Maybe you are ending transcending.

Harmonie22 said...

Attention captain Gussman, mission aborted :)

Seriously nice work, smooth ending, smooth landing.

mark said...

what's next?

Jason Gusmann said...

maxine, cocoyea, paul, maekitso, mariana, harmonie, mark:

i haven't been part of a writers' group since undergrad. this has been much, much better. thank you all so much for letting me in yr group!

Sack Posset said...

Hello, I came here via Gingatao and I just wanted to doff my cap. I really like the cut of your jib.

Jason Gusmann said...

why, thanks sp! stop by again!