Friday, May 8, 2009

GUN CRAZY (Part Twenty-Two)

Amnesty International
could you please send many
hand-written letters
full of pleas for freedom
and civil rights
to my sister's captors
so that my girlfriend and I
can rest easy
in the assurance
that all diplomatic avenues
were exhausted
before we
went to the fortress
where my sister was kept
and razed it the fuck to the ground.


Paul said...

Cool. That ending just goes bang!

Jason Gusmann said...

"bang, bang, make the music go bang
brilliant, shining and nasty"

- X

Maxine said...

Poetry with soul. Thankyou for baring it. I gotta add you to my sidebar, Jason.

Mental Mist said...

nothing was solved with violence except this thing here,
who said anything needed solving more than a solvent :)

loved this, sometimes its war

Jason Gusmann said...

again, M, MM - thank you both for yr comments about soul and war, two things i was really hoping GC would convey - glad you're here