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SOME SHIT FROM CHEM'S NOTEBOOK
that older blonde guy in again – eats alone like me – reads instead of writing tho
cant tell if hes creep or cool – seems nice to the thai guy
whatever for that tho – prolly just doesnt want him to spit in the food
or piss or shit in the food – they pretty much can do whatever they want in the back RIGHT?
right chem – uhhhhhhhhh yeah
what r they doing over by the stereo – hmmmmm
COOL they put on something like basic channel but not as microhousey
is that a word – microhousey – i wanna live in a microhousey
with my micro-doggy and my micro-dotties
wonder if hes on mi MICA wavelength – could be – seems a leetle twitchy
woooo hoooo twitchy woman
def seems way too aware/anxious to just be factory issue
post-showroom mods are def in place – look at the way his eyes move
WAIT WAIT - where u goin
awwwwwwwwwww – i thot u and me were gonna be friends
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6 comments:
Spooky
Thanks, Paul!
Everybody, anybody - Just to clarify: "Chem" is the name of the blue-haired girl in Phuket in chapter 10 scribbling in her notebook. Something I will need to clarify in the final manuscript, because her notebook appears in the text again before we actually "meet" her.
now this is so cool geez you are brilliant
Hmm, I don't think you have to clarify, I got it off the bat that it was the girl from the resturant. You made it pretty clear that there was a connection between her and KG. Great foreshadowing.
Fantastic stuff (though I'm sure I always end up saying that). I can definitely sense something ominous on the horizon ...
thank you so much, beautiful people
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