Friday, May 7, 2010

PSYCHOPOMP - CHAPTER ELEVEN (Twitter Novel / Keitai Shousetsu)

For Chapter One, click here


that older blonde guy in again – eats alone like me – reads instead of writing tho

cant tell if hes creep or cool – seems nice to the thai guy

whatever for that tho – prolly just doesnt want him to spit in the food

or piss or shit in the food – they pretty much can do whatever they want in the back RIGHT?

right chem – uhhhhhhhhh yeah

what r they doing over by the stereo – hmmmmm

COOL they put on something like basic channel but not as microhousey

is that a word – microhousey – i wanna live in a microhousey

with my micro-doggy and my micro-dotties

wonder if hes on mi MICA wavelength – could be – seems a leetle twitchy

woooo hoooo twitchy woman

def seems way too aware/anxious to just be factory issue

post-showroom mods are def in place – look at the way his eyes move

WAIT WAIT - where u goin

awwwwwwwwwww – i thot u and me were gonna be friends

Click here for Chapter 12


Paul said...


Jason Gusmann said...

Thanks, Paul!

Everybody, anybody - Just to clarify: "Chem" is the name of the blue-haired girl in Phuket in chapter 10 scribbling in her notebook. Something I will need to clarify in the final manuscript, because her notebook appears in the text again before we actually "meet" her.

tipota said...

now this is so cool geez you are brilliant

Cocoyea said...

Hmm, I don't think you have to clarify, I got it off the bat that it was the girl from the resturant. You made it pretty clear that there was a connection between her and KG. Great foreshadowing.

Tracey said...

Fantastic stuff (though I'm sure I always end up saying that). I can definitely sense something ominous on the horizon ...

Jason Gusmann said...

thank you so much, beautiful people