Saturday, May 16, 2009
GUN CRAZY (Part Twenty-Seven)
- blank -
jammed between channels
white static noise
NO MORE: words, war, bullets, blood, sister, captor, codes, codices, enemies, lines, fortress, radio, Rimbaud, angels, heroes, agents, decoders, demands, translators, transmitters, nations, generations, translations, transcending, transmission, mission
NO MORE: win
NO MORE: lose
NO MORE: gun
NO MORE: crazy
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11 comments:
And that's it. Hope the ending feels like one. Thanks for reading!
Love this. Now where is the audio?
It does feel like an ending to a very powerful piece. I enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing.
Style.
Congratulations. Not the end but 'an end'. I need to learn some new accolades befitting of your originality and passion. Standing ovation.
Great poem.
It shows you are jammed between channels.(By the way great phrases)
What is the reason for all that banning? just because? do you plan to acomplish something?
Maybe you are ending transcending.
Attention captain Gussman, mission aborted :)
Seriously nice work, smooth ending, smooth landing.
what's next?
maxine, cocoyea, paul, maekitso, mariana, harmonie, mark:
i haven't been part of a writers' group since undergrad. this has been much, much better. thank you all so much for letting me in yr group!
Hello, I came here via Gingatao and I just wanted to doff my cap. I really like the cut of your jib.
why, thanks sp! stop by again!
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